I have received many presents when I have my eleven birthday party. My parents give me a teddy bear, my uncle gives me a book. My best friend gives me a goldfish. Among all the gifts, I love the goldfish the most. I always want to have a pet in the family, but my parents don’t allow me to keep one. Now I have my own goldfish. I will keep it and take good care of it. This goldfish is very beautiful. Its colour is pink. I love watching it swimming in the water. Sometimes, I will feed it. I wish it can grow up with me. This is the best birthday present ever!

在我11歲的生日聚會上,我收到了很多禮物。我的父母送給我一個泰迪熊,我的叔叔送我一本書。我最好的朋友送了我一條金魚。在這些禮物中,我最喜歡的是金魚。我一直想在家里面養(yǎng)只寵物,但是我父母不允許?，F(xiàn)在,我有了自己的寵物魚。我會好好照顧它的。這條金魚非常美麗,它是粉色的。我很喜歡看它在水里面游來游去。有時候,我會喂它。我希望它能和我一起長大。這是我收到最好的生日禮物!

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