Last night, I saw a movie about a girl who behaved not well in the bus, someone took the video of what she did and pubished it on the Internet. The next day, the girl was condemned by the world, she finally suicided. The movie represents the violence of the Internet, it arises people’s thinking on the civilization of the Internet.

昨晚，我看了一部電影，這是關(guān)于一個女孩在公車上行為不雅，有人把她所做的拍下來并公布在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上。第二天，女孩受到了全世界的譴責(zé)，最后她自殺了。電影體現(xiàn)了網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力，這引起了人們關(guān)于文明網(wǎng)絡(luò)的思考。

As the development of the Internet, nowadays, people can share the information in a quick way. People have the access to the instance news and can give their opinions on the Internet. But we see from these years that as there is no rule to supervise the Internet, some people use this stage to attack others. The most famous example is that a famous Korean female star killed herself because of the rumor from the network. Though network allows us express our opinion, we should not attack others.

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，現(xiàn)在人們可以快速分享信息。人們可以接觸到及時即時新聞，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上發(fā)表他們的看法。但是從這些年來看，沒有條例監(jiān)督網(wǎng)絡(luò)，一些人使用這個平臺去攻擊其他人。最出名例子就是一個出名的韓國女明星由于網(wǎng)絡(luò)的謠言而自殺了。即使網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓我們表達(dá)自己的看法，但是我們不應(yīng)該攻擊人。

The violence of network is much harmful to the body violence. Wrong rumors can destroy a person’s mind, the one who spread the rumor should be condemned, he is just like a killer who is out of responsibility. In order to civilize people’s behavior on the Internet, a law should be made to supervise the manipulation.

網(wǎng)絡(luò)暴力比肢體暴力更加傷害人。錯誤的謠言能夠摧毀一個人的心智，那些散步謠言的人應(yīng)該受到譴責(zé)，他就好比一個不用負(fù)責(zé)任的殺手。為了使人們文明上網(wǎng)，應(yīng)該制定法律來監(jiān)督網(wǎng)絡(luò)的操作。

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