Many people believe that having alot of money is the greatest happiness in life. But I don't agree with them,because money is not everything. Money can't make us a true man.

很多人認為擁有很多錢是人生最大的幸福。但我不同意他們的想法，因為錢不是一切。金錢不能使我們成為一個真正的男人。

The way I see it, good health is much better than a lot of wealth. No matter how much money we have, we'll not feel happy at all if we are in poor health. In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habit.

在我看來，健康比財富更重要。如果不健康，不管有多少錢，我們都不會快樂。為了保持健康，我們必須要保持積極的態(tài)度，形成良好的生活習慣。

Apart from good health, we must be diligent at work. As long as we work hard, we cannot just make a good living, but enrich our minds.

除了良好的健康，我們必須勤奮工作。只要我們努力工作，我們不僅可以過上好生活，而且還可以豐富思想。

Additionally, we ought to give our helpful hands to others when they are in need. While helping others, we can own a good fame as well as get more social experience. It's really a good wayto kill two birds with one stone. Only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.

此外，我們應該在別人需要幫助的時候幫助別人。在幫助他人的同時，我們可以擁有一個好名聲，并獲得更多的社會經(jīng)驗。這真是一舉兩得的好方法。只有這樣我們才能享受幸福的生活。

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